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希望大家盡力指出我錯處狠心批改,不必留情.並且希望說明錯的原因感謝An unforgottable experience I tell you a secret but you cannot laugh at me --- I don't know how to ride a bicycle.My friends taught me to ride a bicycle today. Firstly, we went to a store to rent a few bicycles. Then my friends told me riding a bicycle... 顯示更多 希望大家盡力指出我錯處 狠心批改,不必留情. 並且希望說明錯的原因 感謝 An unforgottable experience I tell you a secret but you cannot laugh at me --- I don't know how to ride a bicycle. My friends taught me to ride a bicycle today. Firstly, we went to a store to rent a few bicycles. Then my friends told me riding a bicycle needed my sense of balance, which is very important to ride bicycles. The training was beginning, I tried to ride the bicycle and my friends would hold the bicycle behind me for controling the balance. Although my friends were holding me, I still was unstable to move. After a while, my friends wanted me riding the bicycle without their help. However, I fell on the road in a second after they did that. Thus, we tried again. It was sunset. Unfortunately, I still could not master how to ride a bicycle but I would not give up easily, because my friends were helping me hard. I have many good friends, how lucky I am.
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An unforgettable experience (unforgettable is an adjective which means you will never forget, so do not have tenses for unforgettable) Let me tell you a secret but you cannot laugh at me --- I don't know how to ride on a bicycle. My friends taught me how to ride a bicycle today. Firstly, we went to a store to rent a few bicycles. Then my friends told me riding (no a) bicycle needs (we use a present tense here because the “need” is a common verb that happens everyday – every time you ride on a bicycle, so no need to use past tense) a sense of balance, which is very important for ridding bicycles. Then the training began. I tried to ride the bicycle and my friends were holding the bicycle behind me to control the balance of the bike. Although my friends were holding me, I still was moving unstably. After a while, my friends wanted me to ride the bicycle without their help. However, right after they took off their hands, (this sentence can give deeper impression to the reader as if they were watching you) I fell down on the road immediately! Unfortunately, we had to tried again !!! It was already sunset but I still could not master the skill on how to ride a bicycle. Nevertheless I did not give up easily, because my friends were helping me with all their efforts. I am lucky to have many good friends. (The story has not finished. Your topic was “an unforgettable experience, therefore your punch line should be relating to your topic. Using “I have many good friends, how lucky I am” is not appropriate because your topic was not “my good friends. I suggest you to finish the last part with your feeling on this unforgettable experience, such as : Until today I still cannot ride on a bicycle, but I will never forget all the helps my good friends were offering to me in my learning course.)
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An [1] unforgettable experience I tell you a secret but you cannot laugh at me --- I don't know how to ride a bicycle. My friends taught me to ride a bicycle today. Firstly, we went to a store to rent [2] several bicycles. Then my friends told me riding a bicycle needed my sense of balance, which is very [3] important. The training [4] began. I tried to ride the bicycle and my friends held it behind me for controlling the balance.Although my friends were holding my bicycle, I still was unstable to move. After a while, my friends suggested me to ride without their help. However, [5] after they laid their hands off my bicycle, I fell onto the ground in just a second. Despite that, we tried again and again. It was already sunset.Unfortunately, I still could not master how to ride a bicycle but I did not give up easily, because all of my friends were helping me hard. I have so many good friends. How lucky am I! [1] Unforgottable -> unforgettable [2] A few -> several A few解作「只得幾個」 (含意: 很少數), e.g. Only a few people survived the fire. 而several純粹指數量係「幾個」, 而沒有此含意。 [3] It is very important 後面不需要再提及 “to ride bicycles “ 因為同一句句子已經交待過係踏單車。 [4] Beginning -> Began 因為只有某D動詞的動作先係有持續性, 可以用 continuous tense, 但有些卻沒有的 (因為個動作係一刹那就完成), 所以不宜用continuous tense。 有持續性的動詞: Running, singing, swimming, jogging, playing, laughing, … 無持續性的動詞: The ceremony started… The TV program ended… The man was killed … The water pipe burst … The war/ fighting erupted … The fire broke out … [5] 馬路係Road 一般室外或者一些特別場地的地下就叫ground 一般室內的地下叫floor|||||i tell you a secret , but u cannot laugh at me--- i don't know how to cycling my friends taught me ride a bicycle today.At the begining ,we went to the bicycle store to rent some bikes. My friends told me that the main point is balance in riding bicycles The training was begin, i tried to ride the bicycle and my friends held the biycle behind me to keep the balance. Although my friends keep doing this, i still unbalance .The time passed , my friends recommend ride the bicycle withour their help.So , i fell on the road instantly .Thus we tried again and again Unfortunately , i cannot control the bicylce well untill the sunset . I would not give up easily because my friends are helping me hard I am very lucky that i have so many good friends. 可能有好多錯．．我都係試試
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希望大家盡力指出我錯處狠心批改,不必留情.並且希望說明錯的原因感謝An unforgottable experience I tell you a secret but you cannot laugh at me --- I don't know how to ride a bicycle.My friends taught me to ride a bicycle today. Firstly, we went to a store to rent a few bicycles. Then my friends told me riding a bicycle... 顯示更多 希望大家盡力指出我錯處 狠心批改,不必留情. 並且希望說明錯的原因 感謝 An unforgottable experience I tell you a secret but you cannot laugh at me --- I don't know how to ride a bicycle. My friends taught me to ride a bicycle today. Firstly, we went to a store to rent a few bicycles. Then my friends told me riding a bicycle needed my sense of balance, which is very important to ride bicycles. The training was beginning, I tried to ride the bicycle and my friends would hold the bicycle behind me for controling the balance. Although my friends were holding me, I still was unstable to move. After a while, my friends wanted me riding the bicycle without their help. However, I fell on the road in a second after they did that. Thus, we tried again. It was sunset. Unfortunately, I still could not master how to ride a bicycle but I would not give up easily, because my friends were helping me hard. I have many good friends, how lucky I am.
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An unforgettable experience (unforgettable is an adjective which means you will never forget, so do not have tenses for unforgettable) Let me tell you a secret but you cannot laugh at me --- I don't know how to ride on a bicycle. My friends taught me how to ride a bicycle today. Firstly, we went to a store to rent a few bicycles. Then my friends told me riding (no a) bicycle needs (we use a present tense here because the “need” is a common verb that happens everyday – every time you ride on a bicycle, so no need to use past tense) a sense of balance, which is very important for ridding bicycles. Then the training began. I tried to ride the bicycle and my friends were holding the bicycle behind me to control the balance of the bike. Although my friends were holding me, I still was moving unstably. After a while, my friends wanted me to ride the bicycle without their help. However, right after they took off their hands, (this sentence can give deeper impression to the reader as if they were watching you) I fell down on the road immediately! Unfortunately, we had to tried again !!! It was already sunset but I still could not master the skill on how to ride a bicycle. Nevertheless I did not give up easily, because my friends were helping me with all their efforts. I am lucky to have many good friends. (The story has not finished. Your topic was “an unforgettable experience, therefore your punch line should be relating to your topic. Using “I have many good friends, how lucky I am” is not appropriate because your topic was not “my good friends. I suggest you to finish the last part with your feeling on this unforgettable experience, such as : Until today I still cannot ride on a bicycle, but I will never forget all the helps my good friends were offering to me in my learning course.)
其他解答:
An [1] unforgettable experience I tell you a secret but you cannot laugh at me --- I don't know how to ride a bicycle. My friends taught me to ride a bicycle today. Firstly, we went to a store to rent [2] several bicycles. Then my friends told me riding a bicycle needed my sense of balance, which is very [3] important. The training [4] began. I tried to ride the bicycle and my friends held it behind me for controlling the balance.Although my friends were holding my bicycle, I still was unstable to move. After a while, my friends suggested me to ride without their help. However, [5] after they laid their hands off my bicycle, I fell onto the ground in just a second. Despite that, we tried again and again. It was already sunset.Unfortunately, I still could not master how to ride a bicycle but I did not give up easily, because all of my friends were helping me hard. I have so many good friends. How lucky am I! [1] Unforgottable -> unforgettable [2] A few -> several A few解作「只得幾個」 (含意: 很少數), e.g. Only a few people survived the fire. 而several純粹指數量係「幾個」, 而沒有此含意。 [3] It is very important 後面不需要再提及 “to ride bicycles “ 因為同一句句子已經交待過係踏單車。 [4] Beginning -> Began 因為只有某D動詞的動作先係有持續性, 可以用 continuous tense, 但有些卻沒有的 (因為個動作係一刹那就完成), 所以不宜用continuous tense。 有持續性的動詞: Running, singing, swimming, jogging, playing, laughing, … 無持續性的動詞: The ceremony started… The TV program ended… The man was killed … The water pipe burst … The war/ fighting erupted … The fire broke out … [5] 馬路係Road 一般室外或者一些特別場地的地下就叫ground 一般室內的地下叫floor|||||i tell you a secret , but u cannot laugh at me--- i don't know how to cycling my friends taught me ride a bicycle today.At the begining ,we went to the bicycle store to rent some bikes. My friends told me that the main point is balance in riding bicycles The training was begin, i tried to ride the bicycle and my friends held the biycle behind me to keep the balance. Although my friends keep doing this, i still unbalance .The time passed , my friends recommend ride the bicycle withour their help.So , i fell on the road instantly .Thus we tried again and again Unfortunately , i cannot control the bicylce well untill the sunset . I would not give up easily because my friends are helping me hard I am very lucky that i have so many good friends. 可能有好多錯．．我都係試試
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